Magic~

[125hive]

This is a poem I wrote some two years ago, and everyone in my family thought it was great, so I decided to put it up here. If people like this one, then I might put my other ones up here too... =)

Magic

Magic is wonderful, magic is free
Magic floats all around me
The magic of creation, the one that made man
(Everyone else says it was the big bang)
Look at the magicians of Pharoh they made from sticks
Huge giant serpents that could sink mighty ships
But the magic of Allah just overcame them
For they were using the magic of Satan
Magic is around me, magic is there
But for the magic of Allah, some people dont care
They use magic for evil and despair
There is a lesson here to be learned
Dont use magic unless you want to be burned
For magic can make tables walk
And a common fork talk
But it will never benifit you in any way.
END

This is one of my better poems, and I think this is pretty good for a 15 y/o =)

ALI

[Covered Beauty]

Salamz

Jazaks for sharing bro Ali.. good on ya.. keep it up inshAllah.
At least you know how to write a poem, unlike some people :shifty: (me) :happy:

Salamz

[Fresh_SouL]

MashAllah excellent stuff, i remember i was shocking with creative writting, Alhumdulilah.:happy:

[Rassila]

Indeed impressive ;) Its not easy writing poetry.

Kepp them coming br Ali, share them all. Also cool first post! -> introduce yourself (http://www.sydneymuslimyouth.com/smyforum/forumdisplay.php?f=17)inshallah

:)