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XoomYa
08-11-08, 08:25 PM
ok. somewhere here it says 2 rite a creative story about hsc. i know i ahven't done it, but i think some ppl mite have felt this way b4. i dunno. but i do sorta exaggarate. anyway i wrote a atory:
As the clouds parted, the sun’s rays lit up the skies and ground. Flowers bloomed and bathed in the sun’s warm glow. As the rays travelled, anxious faces, filled with stress, became apparent. Finally, the building in the far edge became lit up also.

The building looked cold. Uninviting. Ominous, even in the sun’s intense light. With a mournful gaze I turned away. Each line, crack and crevice on the building screamed out to me of what lay inside: my doom.

Even with all the sleepless nights, dreams and preparations for this day –for this very moment- I was not ready. How could I be?

After a seemingly long wait, the doors of the building creaked open, revealing rows and rows of torture: tables and chairs.

At the sight, my carefree demeanour succumbed to the fear inside. Sweat beads erupted on my forehead; my hands became clammy and tense, clutching my lifeline so hard that my knuckles had turned white.

Saying bismillah, I took a step forward. The simple sentence just uttered, filled me with courage. Each step seemed to beat renewed faith and hope into me, pumping through the veins, reaching the very marrows of every bone and muscle.

I stepped into the building with the weapons of faith and ink…

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3 hours later, I emerged from the building –exhausted, but with a victorious smile etched into my face- into the pouring rain. The weather mocked me, but my happiness and pure delight was of more importance.

I HAD FINISHED MY HSC FOREVER!!!

Rassila
10-11-08, 09:08 AM
Salams,

Its funny that your in yr 8 speaking about a yr 12 experience /wink I guess.. many exams though give you the same feeling. However theres this special taste to the HSC.

Loved yo ustory as i said sis. And i actually REALLY want someone to write a story about their exam and linking it to the exam of the akhirah .. any takers? sumya? eg. maybe from where you wrote " i stpped into the building with weapons of faith and ink.." instead of drawing a line and hitting the conclusion of the exam fill up that BIG gap with.. your thoughts about the dunya exam + the kahirah exam that instant, your fear of failure, ur drive to do well, the feeling of 'preparing' etc

Your story is very very descriptive which makes it prose (look it up iA if u dont kno wwhat it means)

keep it up sis!
wassalam
RaS

XoomYa
10-11-08, 04:56 PM
Its funny that your in yr 8 speaking about a yr 12 experience /wink I guess.. many exams though give you the same feeling. However theres this special taste to the HSC.

actually no, i got it frm my freinds around me. what they do. if i did mine, it would be no interesting because i don't care about the exams.


And i actually REALLY want someone to write a story about their exam and linking it to the exam of the akhirah .. any takers? sumya?

ok, inshallah, i will, but it may come a bit late.

Basmah
11-11-08, 03:07 PM
OMG! i HAVE tO cOmment i HAVE to!!!

Mashalla sis "Summaiyah".. that was a BEautiful CREATIVE writing... HOnestly everythin saiddd i have actually been thrOugh!!... HSC is One of the ROughest TOughest Timess!! ( if that makes sense LOL)...


sleepless nights, dreams and preparations for this day –for this very moment- I was not ready.

i ABSOLUTELY had nO sleep for 2 weeks!! even if i gO 2 sleep i'll b thinkin abt my exam!! ( MINd you it'll b a wk later LOL)... nt dreams!! U MEAN NIGHTMARES! hehe.. nd btw i never felt lyk i was prepared!!.. subhan allahh i always had this cell in my brain that wasnt prepared hehehe..

njad wen i finishd my last 2 exams( cause i had 2 On the final day) i went outt NOT bothered to smile or laugh or nothin!! i just needed to sleepp!! i was callin out for my beddd!!! it was EXHAUSTIN!!

wOrst experience!! BT hay mOre tO COME eyyyy!! lol

XoomYa
11-11-08, 05:47 PM
^awesome.=)
i guessed most of it and i hav frends in yr 11 12 so when i hear them talking i observed...

XoomYa
11-11-08, 05:52 PM
Your story is very very descriptive which makes it prose (look it up iA if u dont kno wwhat it means)
is thhat complimenting or critisizing? coz i looked it up, coz i didn't know what it meant =) and it said a lot of stuff. it says its straightforward, which my eng teacher says is bad, or somehting.

Beauty of the Religion
11-11-08, 06:33 PM
Subhanallah, I wish I could write stories like that. I guess it's because I'm not an addict to reading like some people ;P.

But I am formidable at writing in non-fiction. It is a talent yet to be unleashed.

Basmah
11-11-08, 07:22 PM
^awesome.=)
i guessed most of it and i hav frends in yr 11 12 so when i hear them talking i observed...

Yess siss mashallah u gOt mOst Of itt..:hi 5:

its amazing how your talented when ur just in yr8 mashallah..

Jazaki allah kher sis/wow

XoomYa
11-11-08, 08:56 PM
Subhanallah, I wish I could write stories like that. I guess it's because I'm not an addict to reading like some people ;P.

lol. =)

But I am formidable at writing in non-fiction. It is a talent yet to be unleashed.
really? that's inteersrting. i neva knew that non fiction can be written like a fictional story. i'm not critisizing by the way, it is interesting.

i
ts amazing how your talented when ur just in yr8 mashallah..

Jazaki allah kher sis/wow

is it really that good? /confused it was just fun i was writing for.

Rassila
12-11-08, 06:28 AM
is thhat complimenting or critisizing? coz i looked it up, coz i didn't know what it meant =) and it said a lot of stuff. it says its straightforward, which my eng teacher says is bad, or somehting.

no.. wait.. either i have the wrong word or it has two meaning :blink: its meant to mean 'very descriptive' not straightforward... rather poetic, with the style and qualities of a poem.

Ill get back to this. lol

XoomYa
12-11-08, 08:34 PM
it says descriptive too, i'm confused.
lol.
ut it says poetic n this can't be put together, i'm, utering nonsense.

XoomYa
15-11-08, 10:43 PM
And i actually REALLY want someone to write a story about their exam and linking it to the exam of the akhirah .. any takers?
sumya? ok, inshallah, i will, but it may come a bit late. __________________

sorry, but i don't think i'll do it anymore. i'm scared i'll do and write something wrong and then get sinned. but i could do it a bit different, describing the Day, but even that's scary, coz i don't want to d anythong worng.

so sorry.